Hi!
We definitely the same pattern again and again...
(i) awards: service acknowledges awards -- please provide rules and scope of participation -- also complained that these are "student awards"
- Response: We reiterated that rules had been provided, noted number of applicants for each award (substantiated with letters from the society), had experts testify that these are not "student" honors
Well, it is clear that they don't like those student awards.. see other threads where it was already commented. They claim that those "student awards" are promises of great achievements, while they want achievements.
(ii) membership: service acknowledges membership BUT show membership is exclusive.
- Response: As before, we sent info from membership websites to show that some societies (phi-kappa-phi) are by Dean's nomination, and others have a credentials committee that approves new members
I'm afraid Dean's nomination is not really enough. They have in mind something like the NSA or Fellow (distinguished Memeber) of a national professional society.
(iii) Judge of work: service acknowledges BUT peer review is routine! Show that you review exceptionally large volumes of papers/grants
-Response: letters from editors of journals stating this
The write in all their documents (appeals included) that indeed reviewing others' work is normal for a researcher.
(iv) Scholarly contributions: Service states that with less than 50 cites, I don't qualify. Also mere cites not sufficiently representative of acclaim
- Response: Corrected service that I had 70+ cites and, again, discussed how several scientists claim our work influenced them - also letters
Good that you have more citations to show. It is nice to emphasize those two or three most cited papers you have. Note that you have an average of 2 citations per paper... not much!
(v) Publications: Prove that these papers are important
- Response: letters from experts
The problem is the low average number of citations per paper. If the papers are that important, why is it that they are poorly cited? Again, if you have a couple with twenty citations or more, that looks much better!
(vi) Exhibition: What was scope of each conf, how much media publicity etc.
- Response: These are intl meetings, lots of attendees - also restates that govt agencies report using our work for policy-making.
Those exhibitions are not places where you put a poster up. This criterion is for artists, and they explain that well too. It should not have been claimed... It is only upsetting the reader.
(vii) Critical role: Service requests $'s in federal funding.
- Response: Letter from employer stating this.
On that on, I don't know how you evidenced it and which leading or critical role you really played. It is a tough one...
You worke with a lawyer? Just curious...
Chris