semidevil1
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so my friend is trying to come from korea, on a B2 visa, and she is needed to write some kind of letter for future plan, to show what she will do after her visit.
we can't find any sample, but we did write one up, to see if you guys have any suggestions:
Name in Full : Jane Doe
Date of Birth : 1982, xx xxx
Dear Council,
I graduated from Kyungpook National Uni. on Feb 25th 2005. I have been preparing for the public official test to work at the Korea Immigration Bureau, which is going to be on April 10. After I take this exam, I want to go and visit my friend in Oklahoma. The result of the test will be on April 19 (the day that I am planning to come back to Korea).
I am preparing for the Level 8 public official test too. It's going to be on May 29th.
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that is all we have so far.....can you guys kind of critique the letter, and see what we need to add, just to make it better.
also, she says that there needs to be like a title. I have not been able to find any type of sample letter for this type of thing, that is why I am asking...
anyone have any advice?
also, do we need to write everything down on paper? i.e, purpose of trip, itineary, future plan, etc etc? what else would she need written down?
we can't find any sample, but we did write one up, to see if you guys have any suggestions:
Name in Full : Jane Doe
Date of Birth : 1982, xx xxx
Dear Council,
I graduated from Kyungpook National Uni. on Feb 25th 2005. I have been preparing for the public official test to work at the Korea Immigration Bureau, which is going to be on April 10. After I take this exam, I want to go and visit my friend in Oklahoma. The result of the test will be on April 19 (the day that I am planning to come back to Korea).
I am preparing for the Level 8 public official test too. It's going to be on May 29th.
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that is all we have so far.....can you guys kind of critique the letter, and see what we need to add, just to make it better.
also, she says that there needs to be like a title. I have not been able to find any type of sample letter for this type of thing, that is why I am asking...
anyone have any advice?
also, do we need to write everything down on paper? i.e, purpose of trip, itineary, future plan, etc etc? what else would she need written down?