Could anyone give me comments on this sentence that appears in one of my recommendation letters for NIW:
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The national benefits of Mr. XX’s research are so related to our national interests that, in my expert opinion, Mr. XX should be made a permanent resident without having to adversely affect, or unnecessarily disrupt, his work at the center for XXXX, particularly by subjecting him to the regular labor certification process as a prerequisite for obtaining permanent resident status.
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This sentence is to explicitly emphasize that the labor certification should be waived. But I really don't know if it is a good idea to say so, and if I should make some changes on that. I will appreicate your suggestions.
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The national benefits of Mr. XX’s research are so related to our national interests that, in my expert opinion, Mr. XX should be made a permanent resident without having to adversely affect, or unnecessarily disrupt, his work at the center for XXXX, particularly by subjecting him to the regular labor certification process as a prerequisite for obtaining permanent resident status.
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This sentence is to explicitly emphasize that the labor certification should be waived. But I really don't know if it is a good idea to say so, and if I should make some changes on that. I will appreicate your suggestions.